Japanese Temple,©hokkaijapansintro
Nancy's Newest Creation:
TaKu Poetry:
I love Japanese poetry forms & decided to create my own.
I took two of my favorite forms Haiku & Tanka, creating
something similar, yet unique.I kept in mind the ancient
traditional Japanese short, sweet, & simple....yet very powerful poetry !
Ta-Ku, is a 2 line poem, the 1st line consisting of 10 syllables,
the 2nd line consisting of 8 syllables. However, the first line's introduction
must be in contrast/opposite the 2nd line's delivery, while both lines
visualize as a whole.
Example 1 TaKu: Thinking:
All is quiet, silence is deafening,
(silence/speaks)
Example 2 TaKu: Winter:
Winter has arrived, the chill can be felt,
(feelling the chill)
Yet my mind speaks loudly inside !
(deafening/loudly)
(something is going on as a whole)
My skin is numb feeling nothing !
(but now numb because of it)
(perhaps frostbite)